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The Prince of Lies final draft – done!
I know – I didn’t post here at all after the first week, but I was so focused on the draft itself, I didn’t have the time or energy. Usually I give myself two months for initial revisions (and that’s what’s specified in my contract) but this book was already running late and I didn’t Continue Reading »
Prince of Lies, 2nd draft: Chapters 34-38
…and an epilogue! Yes, I finally finished the second draft of The Prince of Lies yesterday. I’m not going to say too much about it here, as I intend to post on my main blog and don’t want to repeat myself, so I’ll just say for the record that the last few chapters still had Continue Reading »
Prince of Lies, 2nd draft: Chapters 26-33
Once again I’ve been too wrapped up in the process of writing to stop and blog about it – or more likely too annoyed by the slow rate of my progress to want to talk about it. These past few chapters have been tricky, in that I had one side of the story pretty well Continue Reading »
Prince of Lies, 2nd draft: Chapters 21-25
Another week of slow progress, followed by another weekend of binge-editing! Most of the scenes in these next few chapters seem to be pretty solid, but I needed to fix the narrative flow by restructuring the chapters and adding an extra scene or transition here and there to make it into a coherent story. Chapter Continue Reading »
Prince of Lies, 2nd draft: Chapters 16-20
I haven’t blogged about this draft in a while because to be honest, I wasn’t making progress. I got stuck on Chapter 16 for ages, and it eventually became clear to me that I wasn’t happy with the narrative flow of the preceding chapters. I wrote some new scenes that ended up being a new Continue Reading »
Prince of Lies, 2nd draft: Chapters 10-15
Owing to my difficulty in typing, I haven’t felt motivated to blog about my editing progress for the past couple of days. The good news is that I’ve been making progress nontheless, and am actually a day ahead of schedule now! These last six chapters have been hard work in some respects, as I’d moved Continue Reading »
Prince of Lies, 2nd draft: Chapter 9
Unfortunately my writing pace has been somewhat hampered over the last 48 hours – not by Christmas but by a minor back injury that makes it very painful to sit upright. It happened on Christmas Day, a result of vigorous hoovering of the living-room carpet followed by much bending over to build my Playmobil castle. I Continue Reading »
Prince of Lies, 2nd draft: Chapter 8
Chapter 8 concludes the current revised section; the first scene is the remainder of the brought-forward incident, then three new scenes build on that. Am enjoying the little details that have arisen from this new timeline – I just wish my Muse would do this on the first draft! This section has also been rather Continue Reading »
Prince of Lies, 2nd draft: Chapter 7
As I predicted, I was knackered after the AMA so my progress has been snail-like this weekend. I only finished this chapter at lunchtime on Sunday, which means that I’m now way, way behind for the week. Part of that is because I’m tired after a long, hectic year, and part is because I’m having Continue Reading »
Prince of Lies, 2nd draft: Chapter 6
Soooo…Chapter 6 has taken me all week. Of course I have the excuse that this was book launch week for The Merchant of Dreams, which is a pretty big deal, but even so it felt a bit painful. This was one of those chapters that was OK in overall outline, but lacked tension, particularly towards Continue Reading »


